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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hollow Lake : Taxi Ride (1)

    I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I've been reading through the many pages I wrote of this story and there are a lot of run on sentences. =P (You ...

    Feb 15, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field

    I'd like to say I enjoyed this- poem? but I refuse to lie, especially since it was absolutely boring. Afterall, whats to be gained from being nice and focussing on ...

    Feb 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ring,Ring, death is here

    What!!! You changed your title!! The old one was much better!

    Feb 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ring,Ring, death is here

    My edits in bold this is my first attempt at writting a horror novel,so i hope you like the first chapter, if not don't hesitate to crit. Enjoy! They Go ...

    Feb 15, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field

    Heyhey, I really enjoyed reading this, expecially the way it was blank verse so you really went to town with your poetic voice, not having to worry too much about ...

    Feb 15, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field

    I stand alone In this huge field. I’m surrounded by grass Lush and perfectly green. There a trees around And a lake With sand near its sides. I feel that ...

    Feb 14, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: I Think I'm In Love #1

    No time to talk, but one thing I wanted to say was that you did a really good job... Well, I think so... I'm a guy too, so I'm not ...

    Feb 12, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Wallpaper

    Okay, this is a try at non-rhyming poetry. I hope that the rhythm is okay, but personally, I like my rhyming poems better.... ~WALLPAPER~ I stood in a hallway And ...

    Feb 12, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?

    I was told on the NaNoWriMo YWP by someone who doesn't get on anymore--chocolatechipmuffin--and me and two others joined after that... This site is totally awesome, though!!

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Carbon Copies

    I don't think that there was really any rhythm, which doesn't make it much of a poem. It was okay, but not great. Um...pretty much do what everyone else said, ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Faucet is on the Fritz

    Oh my gosh! This poem was hilarious! Sorry I don't have time for a good review right now, but I just wanted to say that this rocks!! Lol... I seriously ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter Two

    Here's an edit: "Not that he had ever met any—it was only now that he carried an important message on behalf of the Kind I believe you mean "King"?? himself ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Mutts - Outside

    Oh no!! I didn't notice this early enough. Hmm I do believe that this is the Mutt, is it not? So now I get to figure out how he feels!! ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dragon vs. Slayer

    Okay, here's my third poem. And I do realize that the rhymes seem very forced, but that's part of the point of the comedy. Enjoy--hopefully! DRAGON VS. SLAYER A dragon ...

    Feb 11, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Human Nature

    Wow Wozzell! The rhyming was realy good! You should be a poet my man! The imagery was stop on and I coudn't sense any flaw with it at all, well ...

    Feb 11, 2008


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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