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Re: Hollow Lake : Taxi Ride (1)
I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I've been reading through the many pages I wrote of this story and there are a lot of run on sentences. =P (You ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field
I'd like to say I enjoyed this- poem? but I refuse to lie, especially since it was absolutely boring. Afterall, whats to be gained from being nice and focussing on ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Ring,Ring, death is here
What!!! You changed your title!! The old one was much better!
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Ring,Ring, death is here
My edits in bold this is my first attempt at writting a horror novel,so i hope you like the first chapter, if not don't hesitate to crit. Enjoy! They Go ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field
Heyhey, I really enjoyed reading this, expecially the way it was blank verse so you really went to town with your poetic voice, not having to worry too much about ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field
I stand alone In this huge field. I’m surrounded by grass Lush and perfectly green. There a trees around And a lake With sand near its sides. I feel that ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love #1
No time to talk, but one thing I wanted to say was that you did a really good job... Well, I think so... I'm a guy too, so I'm not ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Wallpaper
Okay, this is a try at non-rhyming poetry. I hope that the rhythm is okay, but personally, I like my rhyming poems better.... ~WALLPAPER~ I stood in a hallway And ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I was told on the NaNoWriMo YWP by someone who doesn't get on anymore--chocolatechipmuffin--and me and two others joined after that... This site is totally awesome, though!!
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Carbon Copies
I don't think that there was really any rhythm, which doesn't make it much of a poem. It was okay, but not great. Um...pretty much do what everyone else said, ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: The Faucet is on the Fritz
Oh my gosh! This poem was hilarious! Sorry I don't have time for a good review right now, but I just wanted to say that this rocks!! Lol... I seriously ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter Two
Here's an edit: "Not that he had ever met any—it was only now that he carried an important message on behalf of the Kind I believe you mean "King"?? himself ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Mutts - Outside
Oh no!! I didn't notice this early enough. Hmm I do believe that this is the Mutt, is it not? So now I get to figure out how he feels!! ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Dragon vs. Slayer
Okay, here's my third poem. And I do realize that the rhymes seem very forced, but that's part of the point of the comedy. Enjoy--hopefully! DRAGON VS. SLAYER A dragon ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Human Nature
Wow Wozzell! The rhyming was realy good! You should be a poet my man! The imagery was stop on and I coudn't sense any flaw with it at all, well ...
Feb 11, 2008
